Daily UX writing challenge. Day #3

Daily UX Challenge Day 3 - Craig Wright, Straygoat Writing Services Ltd

In this series of blog posts, I'm exploring the world of UX writing by completing the Daily UX challenges set by https://www.dailyuxwriting.com.

This post covers the challenge for Day #3.

Scenario

The user is trying to sign in to their account and has entered an incorrect email address.

Challenge

Tell the user to enter the right email.

  • 40 characters max

My answer

A phone showing a secure log in page with an error.

Text:

Check for typo or use other address.

This one was tight with the character count. I wanted to try and account for two possible reasons for the error:

  • The user has entered the correct email address, but has made a mistake when typing it.
  • The user has entered a different email address than the one they use for this account.

As the character limit is strict, I focused on what the user needs to do to fix the problem - either correct a mistake or use a different address. I'm not sold on using the word 'typo', but I don't think I had enough characters to allow for mistake.

In an ideal world, I'd want the message to be more descriptive, but it was difficult with so few characters.

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Craig Wright is an experienced technical writer based in Chesterfield, UK.  He hates writing about himself in the third person, so I shall stop now.

Always interested in new content writing opportunities. Remote working preferred.

Craig Wright technical author

Craig Wright is an experienced technical writer based in Chesterfield, UK.  He hates writing about himself in the third person, so I shall stop now.

Always interested in new content writing opportunities. Remote working preferred.

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